| Step | What it does |
|---|---|
| P = Problem | Put the reader's worry into words |
| A = Affinity | Show empathy (old version: Agitation) |
| S = Solution | Show the problem can be solved, and how |
| O = Offer | Present the concrete proposal and terms |
| N = Narrowing down | Spell out exactly who this is for |
| A = Action | State one clear action to take now |
| Bad example | Fact-based rewrite |
|---|---|
| "Guaranteed to earn" | Signing up is free; no inventory or purchasing |
| "Zero risk, Β₯300k/month" | Small upfront risk β but results vary, nothing guaranteed |
| "Today only β exclusive deal" | Never invent scarcity that isn't real |
| "Skip this, regret it for life" | State who it suits and who it doesn't β honestly |
| Formula | Origin | Where to use it |
|---|---|---|
| AIDMA | S. R. Hall (1924) | Funnel design across your whole operation |
| PREP | General business writing | Each body section (conclusion first) |
| New PASONA | Masanori Kanda (2016) | The closing pitch of an article |